Feedback from pitch

                                                                     Feedback

When I did my pitch the whole class including the teacher gave me feedback in order to give me ideas and improve my magazine:
I got feedback about my test shots. They said that I did a lot of test shots and they all look good and they are a lot that I could use, however the cropping was not to good and I need to improve on that because when it comes to making my real product I will need to crop the images properly otherwise I could lose marks. The teacher then told me that I need to think about the locations of the first test shots because it might be hard to edit the picture.
My major problem was that in my pitch I said that I was targeting both genders. This is a issue as it will be hard to produce a magzine that is targeting both males and females. My results are wrong as I ask 5 girls and boys to answer my questionnnaire when I was suppose to ask girls only as they are my main audience. So I might have to re-do my results in order to get reliable results.
I also got told that my front page was very good and had good detailed about where each things are going to go however I aslo got feedback on my DPS and I will need to work harder on it in order to make it better.