You've been working hard here- well done.
Front cover- nice title and purple- the cover doesn't all hang well together and the bottom section seems separate to the top. Lots of blank space so look at layout. Check cropping of photo. The price is large- do you want it this big?!
Contents- you need to use the space better here- a large picture and it takes up a lot of room- edit this as appropriate and make the contents more a list of features as it reads a little like a front cover. Check how many page numbers you have in a mag.
DPS- well-considered layout. Don't over-complicate by having too many font colours- it needs to be clear and easy to read. Check codes and conentions e.g. Drop Caps.
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