Important notice: This is not an essay, this is going to be done in the audio room
Year 2014, elections
have finally started.
Name= President Prelim
States
Elected on the 1st of
January 2014, President P has given his final word that nobody can be as
successful as him. The president of the United Mags has been very specific on
the idea that if anyone tries to overcome him, they will get destroy. He believes
the people in the United Mags need a leader that will bring them to glory and
power and that person is him.
However can this be argued?
Name = Vice President
Pop Beats
Elected on the 19th of
March 2014, the Vice president has been arguing against the President P
proclaims.
The two presidents
have been fighting for the presidency, and the people are starting to get tired
of this debate. Profile of their best
characteristics and votes were out together in order to choose the Untied Mags
best president.
Prelim:
The first thing that the people of this
country noticed was that no planning was done for president P election which
affected the voting in a bad way. The background used for the posters is bright
and colourful which gives them something interesting and an attractive look.
The main image looks attractive however the fact that the president has no eye
contact seems to bother the people has they feel like when they look at someone
in the eyes, they have a special connection and understand this person. The writing
around it looks nice and there are a lot of interesting things to look at and
read and the United Mags LOVE these. One thing is that the people feel like not
enough work was done on these posters and due to this they feel like president
P does not care about them.
Wow!! I guess president
P is not as amazing as he made it sound, now let’s go over to the Vic
president.
Pop beats:
The United Mags feel
like a lot more work was done on these posters and they really appreciate this.
The vice president is giving eye contact and that makes the people more
comfortable and they feel attracted and part of the President POP life. There
is less writing which gives a clear layout of the posters and it makes it
easier for the individuals to communicate with their vice president or as it looks
like their new president. Everything is
clearly laid out and there is clear evidence of editing and work on them. These
posters also offer free things which the people think that is a good thing as
they feel like the vice president is caring for them.
After months of fighting
and debating it looks like the president will have to give away his sit in the
white house. United Mags have seen the different between the posters and they
feel like more research, as well as a lot of planning was done on the Vice
president posters.
This is a real shame
for the President; he should be leaving the white house tonight.


L'Viany. I can see that there is a really interesting idea behind this in terms of you identifying the fact that the real product is more successful than your prelim. I suggest you record the speech as you wanted to but maybe get some of your audience to listen and give you feedback as I think what you are communicating may be confusing and unclear.
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