Monday, 31 March 2014

Evaluation Draft Question 7

Looking back at your prelim task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full prduct?

Important notice: This is not an essay, this is going to be done in the audio room



Year 2014, elections have finally started.





Name= President Prelim States

Elected on the 1st of January 2014, President P has given his final word that nobody can be as successful as him. The president of the United Mags has been very specific on the idea that if anyone tries to overcome him, they will get destroy. He believes the people in the United Mags need a leader that will bring them to glory and power and that person is him.

 

However can this be argued?





Name = Vice President Pop Beats

Elected on the 19th of March 2014, the Vice president has been arguing against the President P proclaims.

 

The two presidents have been fighting for the presidency, and the people are starting to get tired of this debate.  Profile of their best characteristics and votes were out together in order to choose the Untied Mags best president.

 

Prelim:
The first thing that the people of this country noticed was that no planning was done for president P election which affected the voting in a bad way. The background used for the posters is bright and colourful which gives them something interesting and an attractive look. The main image looks attractive however the fact that the president has no eye contact seems to bother the people has they feel like when they look at someone in the eyes, they have a special connection and understand this person. The writing around it looks nice and there are a lot of interesting things to look at and read and the United Mags LOVE these. One thing is that the people feel like not enough work was done on these posters and due to this they feel like president P does not care about them.

 

Wow!! I guess president P is not as amazing as he made it sound, now let’s go over to the Vic president.

 

Pop beats:
The United Mags feel like a lot more work was done on these posters and they really appreciate this. The vice president is giving eye contact and that makes the people more comfortable and they feel attracted and part of the President POP life. There is less writing which gives a clear layout of the posters and it makes it easier for the individuals to communicate with their vice president or as it looks like their new president.  Everything is clearly laid out and there is clear evidence of editing and work on them. These posters also offer free things which the people think that is a good thing as they feel like the vice president is caring for them.

 

After months of fighting and debating it looks like the president will have to give away his sit in the white house. United Mags have seen the different between the posters and they feel like more research, as well as a lot of planning was done on the Vice president posters.

 

This is a real shame for the President; he should be leaving the white house tonight.
 
 
The new president of the United Mags!!

1 comment:

  1. L'Viany. I can see that there is a really interesting idea behind this in terms of you identifying the fact that the real product is more successful than your prelim. I suggest you record the speech as you wanted to but maybe get some of your audience to listen and give you feedback as I think what you are communicating may be confusing and unclear.

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