Due to my feedback I had top change most of the parts in my scripts in order for it to make more sense to an audience.
"And here we are year 2014, elections have finally started. President Prelim and Minister Pop beats are finally running against each other for the beautiful sit in the white house."
Here comes the President Prelim!!
Elected on the 1st of January, President P has given his final word that nobody can be as successful as him. The current president of the United Mags has been very specific on the ides that if anyone tries to overcome him, they will get destroy. He believes that the people in the United Mags need a leader, a leader that will bring them to glory and power and that person he believe is him.
However can this be argued?
And here come Minister Pop Beats (clapping)
Elected on the 19th of March, the Minister has been arguing against the President P proclaims. Stating that he is too big headed and does not have what it takes to lead the country.
The two presidents have been fighting, fighting and fighting and the people are starting to get tires of this debate. In order to decide the future President that is going to be leaving in the white house, both of them were asked to create the front cover of a magazine choosing the topic that they wanted and present it to the people.
Let`s go over to President P who`s topic is school, however is this topic really going to attract the people from this country especially teens?
The first thing that the people of this country noticed was that hardly any planning was done for President P magazine which could affect the voting in a bad way. The background used for the magazine is bright and colourful which gives it something interesting and an attractive look. The main image looks attractive and takes the whole page however the fact that the person on the magazine has no eye contact seems to bother the people as they feel like when they look at someone in the eyes, they have a special connection and understand this person. The writing around it looks nice and there are a lot of interesting things to look at and read and the United Mags loves these. Another that really the people from this country did not like is that they felt like not enough work was done on this front cover and due to this they feel like President P does not car about them.
WOW!!! I guess President P is not as amazing as he made it sound, now let`s go over Minister Pop Beats.
Topic chosen Pop music
The United Mags people feel like a lot more work was done on this front
cover and they really appreciate this. The people on the Magazine are giving
eye contact and that makes the people from the United Mags more comfortable and
they feel attracted to it. There is less writing which gives a clear layout
however it does look a bit empty. Everything is clearly laid out and there
is evidence of editing and work on it. This magazine also offer free
things which the people thing is a good idea as they feel like Minister
is caring for them. One other thing is that a lot less colours were used and it looks a bit empty. The United Mags people feel like there are things on the front cover which does not necessarily make it look like a music magazine. However there is a big jump from President P (which was not to good) to Minister Pop Beats which is better.
After months of fighting and debating it look like President P will have to give away his sit in the white house. The people from UM have seen the difference between the two front covers and they feel like more research, as well as a lot of planning was done on Minister Pop Beats magazine front cover.
This is a real shame for President P, he should be leaving the white house tonight.
Well it looks like we have a new president, please clap for the NEW PRESIDENT OF THE UNITED MAGS!!! (clapping)


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