Due to the feedback that I got, I will not add music to my video as it might go over the voices of the people talking. However I did take important points positive as well as negative from each person.
Esme Asare
Esme Asare is 12 years old. I asked her questions about my music magazine and she gave me both positive and negative points:
* One of the good and important points that Esme gave me is that she said that my magazine looked like a music magazine which is good as this was the whole point of the task. She also said that everything was easy to see and find which is important on a magazine.
* However said that I could have maybe added music notes in order to make the genre a bit clearer.
Angela Asare
* Angela Asare sated that my music magazine is very eye catching which is an important selling point.
* But she said that on the DPS there is too much writing and that I should added more pictures. This could be a big disadvantage as my target audience is from 12-16 years old.
Anotida Mugari
* The negative points from Anotida was that the colours were clashing. The purple and yellow do not look good together and this might affect the audience into buying the magazine.
* However she say that it looked good and it would have looked better maybe with less yellow.
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